Task A
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Outline the controversy about the Colston statue in Bristol as presented in the article.
(Comprehension) (12 Punkte)
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Analyse how the author presents his views. Focus on communicative strategies and use of language.
Choose one of the following tasks:
(Analysis) (16 Punkte)
3.1
According to David Olusoga the toppling of Edward Colston's statue "is one of those rare historic moments whose arrival means things can never go back to how they were" (ll. 69/70). Assess to what extent this view on the incidents in Bristol is a valid description of recent developments in multicultural Britain.
(Evaluation: comment) (14 Punkte)
OR
3.2
In the USA, journalists have been fired for criticising the violent tearing down of historical statues in their articles. In response, Jonathan Turley, Professor of Public Interest Law, warns, "We are experiencing one of the greatest threats to free speech in our history and it is coming, not from the government, but from the public." Referring to this statement, write a letter to Turley in which you reflect on the importance of free speech in the USA against the background of American myths and realities.
(Evaluation: re-creation of text) (14 Punkte)
Text:
David Olusoga, The toppling of Edward Colston's statue is not an attack on history. It is history.
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For people who don't know Bristol, the real shock when they heard that the statue of
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a 17th-century slave trader had been torn from its plinth and thrown into the harbour
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was that 21st-century Bristol still had a statue of a slave trader on public display. [...]
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Edward Colston, the man in question, was a board member and ultimately the deputy
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governor of the Royal African Company. In those roles he helped to oversee the trans-
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portation into slavery of an estimated 84,000 Africans. Of them, it is believed, around
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19,000 died in the stagnant bellies of the company's slave ships during the infamous
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Middle Passage from the coast of Africa to the plantations of the new world. The bodies
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of the death were cast into the water where they were devoured by the sharks that, over
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the centuries of the Atlantic slave trade, learned to seek out slave ships and follow the
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bloody paths of slave routes across the ocean. This is the man who, for 125 years, has
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been honoured by Bristol. Put literally on a pedestal in the very heart of the city. But
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tonight Edward Colston sleeps with the fishes.
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The historical symmetry of this moment ist poetic. A bronze effigy of an infamous
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and prolific slave trader dragged through the streets of a city built on the wealth of that
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trade, and then dumped, like the victims of the Middle Passage, into the water. Colston
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lies at the bottom of a harbour in which the ships of the triangular slave trade once
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moored, by the dockside on to which their cargoes were unloaded. [...]
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The crowd who saw to it that Colston fell were of all races, but some were the de-
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scendants of the enslaved black and brown Bristolians whose ancestors were chained
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to the decks of Colston's ships. Ripped from his pedestal, Colston seemed smaller: di-
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minished in both size and potency. Lying flat, with his studied pensive pose, he looked
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suddenly preposterous. It was when the statue was in this position that one of the pro-
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testers made a grim but powerful gesture. By placing his knee over the bronze throat
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of Edward Colston, he reminded us of the unlikely catalyst for these remarkable events.
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The fact that a man who died 299 years ago is today on the front pages of most of
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Britain's newspapers suggests that Bristol has not been brilliant at coming to terms with
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its history. Despite the valiant and persistent efforts of campaigners, all attempts to have
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the statue peacefully removed were thwarted by Colston's legion of defenders. In 2019,
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attempts to fix a plaque to the pedestal collapsed after Bristol's Society of Merchant Venturers,
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the high priests of the Colston cult, insisted on watering down the text, add-
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ing qualifications that, it was felt, had the effect of minimising his crimes. Yet what
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repulsed many about the statue was not that it valorised Colston but that it was silent
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about his victims, those whose lives were destroyed to build the fortune he lavished
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upon the city.
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The long defence of the figure and Colston's reputation was overt and shameless,
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but not unique. In other British cities other men who grew rich through the trafficking
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of human beings or who defended the "respectable trade" are venerated in bronze and
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marble. In Edinburgh's St Andrew Square, on a pedestal 150 feet high, stands Viscount
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Melville, Henry Dundas, another of history's guilty men. His great contribution to
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civilisation was to water down and delay attempts to pass an act abolishing the slave
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trade. Historians struggle to estimate how many thousands died or were transported
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into slavery because of his actions. Already social media is ablaze with calls for Dundas
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to be thrown into the Forth.
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Today is the first full day since 1895 on which the effigy of a mass murderer does
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not cast its shadow over Bristol's city centre. Those who lament the dawning of this
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day, and who are appalled by what happened on Sunday, need to ask themselves some
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difficult questions.
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Do they honestly believe that Bristol was a better place yesterday because the figure
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of a slave trader stood at its centre? Are they genuinely unable - even now - to under-
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stand why those descended from Colston's victims have always regarded his statue as
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an outrage and for decades pleaded for its removal?
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If they do not confront such questions they risk becoming lost in the same labyrinth
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of moral bewilderment in which some of Colston's defenders became entrapped in
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2017. That year Colston Hall, Bristol's prime concert venue, and one of the many insti-
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tutions named after the slave trader, announced that it was to change its name. In re-
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sponse, a number of otherwise reasonable decent people announced that they would
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be boycotting the hall. Think about that for a moment. Rational, educated, 21st-century
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people earnestly concluded that they were taking a moral stance by refusing to listen
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to music performed within the walls of a concert hall unless that venue was named after
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a man who bought, sold and killed human beings.
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Now is not the time for those who for so long defended the indefensible to contort
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themselves into some new, supposedly moral stance, or play the victim. Their strategy
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of heel-dragging and obfuscation was predicated on one fudamental assumption: that
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what happened on Sunday would never happen. They were confident that black people
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and brown people who call Bristol their home would forever tolerate living under the
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shadow of a man who traded in human flesh, that the power to decide whether Colston
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stood or fell lay in their hands. They were wrong on every level. Whatever is said over
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the next few days, this was not an attack on history. This is history. It is one of those
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rare historic moments whose arrival means things can never go back to how they were.
(973 words)
David Olusoga: "The toppling of Edward Colston's statue is not an attack on history. It is history", in: The Guardian, 8 June 2020, https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2020/jun/08/edwatd-colston-statue-history-slave-trader-bristol-protest - Copyright Guardian News & Media Ltd 2021
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1.
- in the article “The toppling of Edward Colston’s statue is not an attack on history. It is history.”, published in The Guardian on June 8th, 2020 the controversial debate is presented by David Olusoga.
Introduction:
reference to quotation
reference to quotation
- it's been a long lasting controversy about Edward Colston's statue
- he, who was a notorious slave trader, is honoured for his contribution to Bristol's 125 years of economic prosperity
- all attempts to peacefully remove the statue have been resisted by supporters
- the victims are hushed up
- opponents have been waging a decades-long battle against the statue, as in their eyes, it represents a scandal
- symbol of crimes against humanity
- the descendants of these slaves are constantly confronted with the suffering their ancestors had to endure
Main part:
the controversy
the controversy
- people of all races were involved in the violent toppling of the statue in June 2020
- supporters were shocked and call the event an attack on history
- for opponents, on the other hand, the overthrow of the statue was a historic event
- they believe that this could be a turning point for the voice of people of colour in how Bristol deals with his colonial history
- the inspiration for this act came from protests in the US against police violence against black communities after the death of George Floyd
toppling of the statue
2.
- In his article, Olusoga tries to convince readers of the historical significance of the toppling of Edward Colston's statue.
- communicative language and strategies are used to support his arguments
Introduction:
referring to the task
referring to the task
- Olusoga characterises Colston as "infamous" (l. 7/14) and "prolific" (l. 15) and portrays him as a man "who bought, sold and killed human beings". (l. 61)
- thus the author illustrates him as being a "mass murderer" and shameless slave trader
- gruesome details and facts of his deeds (cf. lines 5-7 and 9-11) serve to validate the author's thesis about Colton's character
- the illustration of these deeds increases society's outrage and evokes unforgettable images
- time references such as "for decades" (l. 52) and "the first full day since 1895" (l. 45) serve to show how long Colston and his statue have been known in Bristol and opposed by activists ever since
Main part:
colston's characterisation and facts
colston's characterisation and facts
- Olusoga describes the activists as "valiant and persistent" (l. 28) to portray a positive image of them.
- these protests have been peaceful for years, which is emphasised by the fact that earlier attempts were made to put Colston's relevance into perspective
positive impression of activists
- the opponents are presented in a negative light
- by calling them a "legion of defenders" (l. 29) and “the high priests of the Colston Cult” (l. 31) the author emphasises the defender's loyalty to Colston
- even though these phrases have a mocking character, expressions like "legions" show that the activists are outnumbered by the supporters
- "Cult" as an implication for the unreasonableness and not rationality of coltonts worship
- absurdity is further underlined by the description of these people as “[r]ational, educated, 21st-century people” (l. 58)
- further, the author refers to the supporters as people lacking moral integrity “lost in [a] labyrinth of moral bewilderment” (l. 53) or “contort themselves into some new, supposedly moral stance, or play the victim” (l. 63)
- directly addressing the readership to "[t]hink about that for a moment" (l. 58) to underline the absurdity of this way of looking at facts
- indicative appeal to supporters “ask themselves some difficult questions” (l. 47)
- purely rhetorical questioning (cf. lines 49-52), emphasis on the outdated view of supporters, view of the descendants of slaves must be taken into consideration
- the fall of the statue can be considered "historic moment" (l. 70) due to the author
- Author's hint that supporters of Colton believed that Bristolians of colour could be ignored
- emphasising the error of the supporters through sentence structures such as in lines 64 - 68
- highlights the supporters' mistaken view with phrases like “[t]hey were wrong on every level” (l. 68)
negative impression of opponents
- the repetition of the word "history" (caption, l. 28, 40 ...) underlines that this kind of suppression is indeed history, and people of colour are demanding their say in the future
- ultimately, Olusoga shows that Colston's supporters are wrong
- the activists have performed a historic act by toppling the statue
Conclusion
3.1
- Olusoga states in his article that the overthrow of the Colston statue is "is one of those rare historic moments whose arrival means things can never go back to how they were" (ll. 69/70)
- for him, this act represents the decisive social and political change
- as ethnic minorities demand their say
- However, Olusoga's solely positive view of the overthrow must also be viewed critically, as the symbolic power of the statue's toppling could also have other slow-term effects
Introduction:
referring to quotation
referring to quotation
- it is true that the fall of the statue means a change on the social and political levels and is indeed a sign for many ethnic minorities to fight for more equality and justice
- however, the mere fall of the statue does not mean that a majority of people and supporters will think differently or suddenly change their minds
- the author does not consider that this kind of social change will neither give a voice to the victims themselves or their descendants nor change the mind of the majority of people
- Brexit showed nationalistic tendencies of the British people
- ongoing controversial debates on immigration
- Ethnic minorities have so far been underrepresented, especially in the sectors that are important for expressing their opinions (e.g. politics, media, legal system)
- despite the Black Lives Matter movement being encouraging and inspiring for people of colour in the UK
- however, they still have to fight for their rights
- this fact shows that individual actions do not have a lasting effect on the general situation
Main part:
possible strands of argumentation
possible strands of argumentation
- I do believe that the overthrow of a slave trader's statue is an extraordinary powerful sign of hope for change
- however, for a lasting change, a change in the mindset of the entire population and more people from ethnic minorities in areas such as politics, the legal system or even the media is mandatory
Conclusion
3.2
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Dear Professor Turley,
- I am a German English student, and as part of my degree, I am researching events that could cause social, political or historical upheaval in the USA or intercontinental.
- While researching the violent overthrow of historical statues in the USA, such as Christopher Columbus, Thomas Jefferson and George Washington, I came across your article and your warning that the US is "... experiencing one of the greatest threats to free speech in [its] history and [that] it is coming, not from the government, but from the public".
- The reason for my writing is that I agree with you wholeheartedly.
Greeting:
presenting yourself and reason for writing
reffering to quote
presenting yourself and reason for writing
reffering to quote
- Freedom of expression is a fundamental right and is enshrined in the Bill of Rights.
- this has been deeply compromised by recent events such as the toppling of the statues of two of the founding fathers of the USA
- the perceptions of the people who tore down the statues have changed in that they no longer see them as founding fathers but as slave owners
- so there are different views and opinions and it should be legal to express both
- firing journalists for doing exactly what the First Amendment was supposed to guarantee, namely free speech, even on controversial issues like the brutal demolition of the Founding Fathers' statues, is not right, in my opinion
- it is appalling that the opinions of angry people apparently outweigh the rights of journalists
- everyone is free to express their opinion as long as it is not racist or discriminatory
- it seems that the US is suffering from an enormous loss of freedom and not least a loss of confidence in democracy and the media
- The distrust of the press and the state institution has been fuelled by former President Donald Trump, among others;
- and ultimately, it is tragic that now, even though he is no longer a sitting head of state, all Americans have to pay the price for his polemics and try to clean up the pieces of mistrust
Main Part:
expression of free speech and its limits
expression of free speech and its limits
- Ultimately, the right to freedom of expression is a fundamental achievement of a country.
- Accordingly, it should not be denied to anyone, whether it is the activists who violently tear down statues to make their voices heard or their opponents and certainly no one who expresses it in peaceful words.
- Kind regards,
Name
Conclusion
Closing
Greeting
Closing
Greeting